Literary reviews by Tim Love.
Warning: Rather than reviews, these are often notes in preparation for reviews that were never finished, or pleas for help with understanding pieces. See Litref Reviews - a rationale for details.

Tuesday, 16 December 2025

"Harbor Lights" by James Lee Burke

An audio book. Short stories.

  • Harbor lights - It's 1942. The narrator, Aaron, is in a fishing boat with his father in the Gulf of Mexico. There are 4 bodies in the water. His father radios that an oil tanker has gone down. He tells his son that a U-boat did it, but that the government will suppress the news. His father, an ex-soldier, had wanted to be a writer. He came from a principled family, his father sacrificing his court career for principles. He drinks. Agents threaten to blackmail him (he has a cultured mistress, Florence). He tells the papers about the ship going down. Florence is imprisoned as a suspected spy. A week later she hangs herself. Years later he witnesses an electric chair execution.
  • Going across Jordan - 2 young drifters go from job to job. One, Buddy, is a union man (a "communist"), the other, Arbee, is an escaped convict. Their current job is breaking in horses for a minor movie star, Clint. Clint lets Buddy borrow his car so he can bring his black girlfriend Bernadette back and Clint can rape her. Agents talk to the drifters. They leave town. Buddy gives Bernadette the money to follow them. She does. Arbee realises that she and Buddy are intellectually better suited together than he and she are. Buddy tries to get Clint in trouble as revenge. They have to leave town again. Buddy sacrifices himself so that Arbee and Bernadette can settle down happily together.
  • Big midnight spend - 1943. Aaron's in a prison with Lifers. He treasures his guitar. There's an electric chair. People tell him he shouldn't be such a purist (i.e. he should be pragmatic). Jodie, the prisoner with power, wants him to submit.
  • Deportees - His mother is frigid and depressed. She's had ECT. Mr Watts touches him. She challenges Mr Watts. He gets 2 Mexicans deported. Her father tries to take revenge. Perhaps she does.
  • The assault - A prof's 17 y.o. daughter is involved with an assault. She was drunk. She may have suffered some brain damage - she starts having fits. The prof asks the police, (Carter) then talks to the assailants - trailer trash who say that the girl behaved badly. The prof wasn't innocent in the past. He hit a cop. He and his wife were both lecturers. One night, after an argument his daughter overheard, he suggested she should leave. She drove off drunk and died in an accident. He befriends Tina, a black colleague who does Minority Studies. He pressurises Carter to follow up his daughter's case (Tina's been threatened by the people who attacked his daughter). At a lake they're intimidated by 3 men. Tina gets out a gun and shoots their tires. The police find out about the gun incident and his past. Carter's partner gives the prof info. One of the assaillants - a woman, apologises to the prof's daughter. The 3 men assault her. He kills the 3 men.
  • The Wild Side of Life - He's an oil explorer. When he was abroad, colleagues had gratuitously bombed natives. He's in a bar when Loreen talks to him. Her husband batters her. He warned that she's married and dangerous. He sleeps with her and finds out that her husband was the bomb-dropping colleague. He thinks about taking revenge but a storm starts and he sees more dead bodies than he saw in the war.
  • Strange Cargo - He's a widower - a teacher with a half-oriental boy. His car's broken down in a small, remote place. In the war he tried to save a native boy. While his car's being mended by a man he doesn't trust, a woman befriends him and his son. There's racism. The woman claims to be the wife of a confederate leader and goes back in time to save the boy he failed to save in the war. He sees his friend who died in battle. The place is full of ghosts, he realises, some hoping to go elsewhere. They take his son. A ghost of his ancestor arrives.
  • A distant war - a old writer, Aaaron, has money and wants to build an animal sanctuary, but the sheriff's against it. The sheriff seems racist and homophobic. He defends himself by pointing out that he's promoted a black female colleague. The writer's daughter, Fanny May, died from drink and drugs, visiting him often as a ghost. He blames himself for her death having taking her to bars. He and his daughter need each other to stay in touch with their other worlds. His gay doctor tells him he might have cancer. He doesn't want further tests. He thinks a fatal car accident may have been caused by a black but should he report this to the racist policeman? He gives jobs to 3 petty criminals. He sees white men torture a black man. Next day he thinks the sheriff might have been one of them. He sees the doctor killing alligators - revenge, the doctor says, for the alligator killing an escaped slave. The doctor is brutally murdered. Fanny says she's having to go and he's in danger. The black policewoman warns him about his workers and the sheriff. He visits her. She kills someone in supposed self-defence.

Police are usually corrupt. Corrupt male police have female colleagues who (off the record) disagree with them. Revenge, both by police and public, may have to be unofficial. White liberal male teachers/lecturers are attacked by poor whites as much for their class as their views.

Other reviews

  • Diane Lechleitner (While some stories in the collection share characters from the same families, others are stand-alones and this causes a lack of cohesiveness. However, the themes of prison, violence, memories of war, despair, morality, survival, and the underbelly of society are consistently woven throughout Harbor Lights.)
  • Kirkus reviews (The best stories are the most sharply focused: “Harbor Lights” ... “The Assault” ... “A Distant War” ... Burke’s not a polisher bent on perfecting every word but a bard who can’t help returning to each story over and over again. )

Monday, 15 December 2025

"Nude modelling for the afterlife" by Henry Normal (Bloodaxe, 1993)

Poems from Channel 4, BBC radio 4, BBC radio 5, etc

Not enough here for a book, let alone a Bloodaxe book of 56 pages. I liked "Mime doesn't pay" and "The breath within the balloon". Here are the other worthwhile bits -

  • I leaflet therefore I am (about the Edinburgh festival, p.13)
  • May your road maps never refold (p.22)
  • Like most kids I suppose I was a natural surrealist.// I used to think nothing of playing football for hours in my cowboy outfit ... the British Eighth Army desert patrol Airfix soldiers would fight off the alien spaceship which was always made out of Lego and manned by Fuzzy-Felt farm animals (p.33)
  • The reflection in the back of God's spoon (p.44)
  • Last night I was burgled by a mime artist ... he tried to steal a piano I haven't got.// He pushed and he pulled, but it wouldn't move ("Mime doesn't pay", p.49)
  • "The mutually assured destruction of Mr and Mrs Jones" (just the title, p.52)
  • Buy World War One, get World War Two free (p.53)
  • I have spent my whole life trying to enter the gates of Heaven using my heart as a battering ram (p.62)

Sunday, 14 December 2025

"Dead girl walking" by Chris Brookmyre

3rd person: Jack Parlabane is interviewed by detectives Mitchell and Pine about his time as an investigative journalist. He’d come by a laptop with info showing that the government had rigged evidence to make it look like terrorists had committed the government’s crimes. He's spent time in prison (perhaps wrongly) and is going through a divorce with Sarah.

1st person: Monica (earlier in time than the other time-line) narrates her first tour with the group.

The time-lines alternate.

Mari, the agent of Savage Earth Heart (an indie group that had gone more commercial and just signed a big contract), asks him to look for their lead singer Haike (mother died young - overdose - and father was a significant artist). He interviews most of the rest of the group. The fiddle player Monica isn't there. She's new – a classically trained girl from the Hebrides. She’s almost a virgin with a boyfriend Keith. Scott, Rory and Damian (37) don't say much new. Haike was a control freak, disliking the group using drugs and sleeping with under-age groupies. She was bi or gay. She'd had a long argument with the merch girls on the tour bus.

Monica had replaced Max, Haike's ex. Max is suing her for song co-credits. Haike wants to bring out the real Monica - she thinks Monica's shy persona is just an image. Haike makes a pass which Monica rejects. Haike knows a female fan is stalking her and invites her to the after-concert events. In Haike's room, Haike found that she and Hanna had so much in common and understood her lyrics. Haike made a pass and Hanna hared out. Haike discovers that that Merch girls on the tour bus are hookers. She suspects that they're being held against their will. Jan, the tour manager, is involved. She tries to alert the police about it. Monica and Haike receive threats. Photos of them kissing go online. Keith is enraged - he's just got promotion and is thinking of their future together. Monica sleeps with the male drummer, which upsets Haike.

Parlabane discovers that the roadies were involved with supplying drugs. He goes to Berlin with Mari to find clues. He knows he's being followed. Someone tries to push him under a U-bahn. On the CCTV of the hotel where Haike was last seen, Keith appears, angry. Maybe the people chasing Parlabane (Boris, etc) are after Haike. He realises that there are secrets on Boris's iPad that he keeps with him. Parlabane infiltrates his workplace and gets into his iPad. On it he finds a copy of Monica's private blog (the 1st person timeline text)

A friend of Hanna's tells Monica and Haike that Hanna was Haike's half-sister - Haike's Berlin-druggie mother hadn't died. Hanna was a mid-european whore, like the merch girls. So was Hanna's friend. She needed $12k to buy herself out. When Haike offers the money to the thugs, they raise the price (they want to be paid in watches). At the exchange, Hanna is killed. Haike shoots her murderer dead. The murderer had a cop's ID card! They escape.

Hanna's found dead. Parlabane turns down the chance of a night with Mari - he's known/fancied her since school days but hopes to return to his wife. They learn that Haike got a train ticket to Denmark on the day she disappeared, and bought 2 expensive watches. He guesses that she's on Isla with Flora, a woman who she treated like a mother (he'd interviewed the woman before. She owned a boat). Parlabane and Mari catch up with Monica on the ferry. They all meet Haike.

Boris wants a million euros to hush Haike's killing of the man. The meeting place is a boat. They set out on Flora's boat. They have police below-deck. Boris is arrested.

It was all a scam - the "Spanish Prisoner" trick. The man wasn't dead. The Hanna story was fake. The roadie who grew up with Haike provided info for the perpetrators.

A clever plot, so I'll forgive the odd creaky detail. The dialogue is interesting. Sometimes we learn of a fact first in one timeline, sometimes in the other. There's a sub-theme of people and their generated images - Monica, Parlabane, as well as "Hanna". The over-arching plot (the book's part of the series) doesn't interfere too much.

Other reviews

  • bookreporter (If there is a downside to this latest offering by Christopher Brookmyre, it’s that it takes a while to ultimately get to it. ... The problem with the narrative is that Brookmyre tends to go off on rants that have little or nothing to do with the actual story. )
  • John Cleal (The relationship between the naive Monica and the driven Heike Gunn, told in the first person, is surprisingly convincing and well written. Brookmyre, as well as having a lively imagination, writes the female roles well, although his characters all tend to speak with a masculine voice. ... This is hardly the greatest book I’ll read this year, largely because of my problems with reconciling the character of Jack with either a man of principle or any reporter I’ve known. But it really is a very good story)
  • Kirkus reviews (A complex back story and some awkward attempts to convey the magic of the lost singer’s music make for a slow start. But Brookmyre [] builds momentum and combines the two distinct narrative voices in a clever duet.)

Saturday, 13 December 2025

"A straightforward guide to writing romantic fiction" by Kate Walker (Straightforward publishing, 2002)

  • Unlike other genres whose popularity fluctuates up and down, the popularity of romances stays consistently high (p.9)
  • As the majority of readers of romantic fiction are women, the character of the heroine is central to their enjoyment of the novel (p.17)
  • Readers can't identify with your heroine unless they have a very clear idea of what she looks like (p.19)
  • If the heroine is the reader's guide into the story, the 'eyes' through which the action is seen, the hero is the character most likely to be remembered (p.25)
  • In some senses, a hero is always a mystery to the heroine (p.28)
  • In fiction there can be a very narrow line between being a gentle man and being a wimp (p.29)
  • at times, the hero must play the role of both the hero and the villian (p.30)
  • The run-up to the final pages are often described as the 'But you said ...' section (p.65)
  • the present story always affects the reader much more than the past (p.120)
  • A book should try to be at least 60% dialogue no more than 40% narrative (p.123)

Many typos - see the final quote above, for example. And there are many extra spaces near apostrophes.

Friday, 12 December 2025

"Blood oath" by Linda Fairstein

An audio book.

The narrator, Alexandra Cooper, a lawyer, is back to work after a case where her boss was shot dead. Her colleague, Helen Wyler, needs her help in a multiple rape case against S. Helen received txts from a witness which she should have forwarded to the defence. Instead she deleted them, and the judge knows. The judge, Corless, has been unfaithful to his wife. He tells Alexandra that his wife claims that he hit her.

Lucy, 24, no fixed abode, is brought to her office. She won't speak to the police. She's mixed race but looks white. When she was 14 and with 2 black friends her friends were shot dead. She was a witness. She's been done for a lot of shoplifting. She tells Alex about a rape case. Nobody took her seriously. A photo in the police station might have triggered a reaction.

She tries to cancel Lucy's previous convictions. She contacts Lucy's aunt. Lucy used to live with her, then Lucy suddenly left, taking money and a cousin's ring. The aunt tells Alexandra that the cousin used to like Lucy, but Lucy can't be trusted. Alex has trouble getting a coherent story from Lucy.

She reveals that she agreed a Blood Oath with an important man who threatened her not to expose him. She gives sufficient hints for Alexandra to deduce that the man is Zak Palmer, head of anti-terrorism.

Francie (a friend/colleague of Alexandra) is in hospital on life-support after collapsing earlier in the day. Alexandra's shocked to learn that she's pregnant. She was poisoned with a nerve agent.

Mike (a detective) is Alexandra's partner. Corless's wife is accusing her husband of trying to strangle her. Zak, divorced, wants to see Alexandra. He's applying to be her boss (the old boss died in the previous case) and wants to talk her out of applying too. His pretty PA, Josie, met Lucy a decade before.

Lucy falls onto subway rails and is saved. Alex thinks it wasn't an accident. She gets Lucy a place in the secure hospital where Francie is. She discovers that Francie has the same blood-oath scar as Lucy has. It's discovered that Zak as a student used to help on a scheme for troubled kids, one of them being Francie. Francie dies in the night. Alex meets Zak and tells him that he'll soon be arrested. She visits Corless and secretly gets a DNA sample from him, suspecting that he's the father of Francie's foetus.

In the hospital Alex is chased through dark tunnels by Josie. Zak's already arrested but Josie doesn't know it. Alex escapes. We learn that Josie is Zak's half-sister.

Good dialogue. Plot twists sometimes depend on detailed technicalities.

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Thursday, 11 December 2025

"Levitation for beginners" by Suzannah Dunn

An audio book.

50+ years later, the first-person PoV Deborah thinks back to her junior village school with its class of 8 (2 boys). She recalls the first day of Sarah Jayne in 1972 when she was about 10. She's searched online for classmates, but presumably they've changed surname. She hasn't. She was the only one of the class to go to grammar school.

Her mother, Sandy Darke, became a widow at 24 and never remarried. She died last week saying "Odd business, up at the vicarage". The vicarage was the grandest house of the village.

Sarah Jayne is more sophisticated than the village girls, and upsets old alliances. Caroline starts ineptly trying to attract the boys' attention. Sarah Jayne comes from "abroad". She knows about vodka.

Deborah tries to piece together from song lyrics, gossip and her mother's guarded comments what marriage is about. Sarah Jayne wants to marry popstar David Cassidy but starts "going out" with one of the 2 boys in the class, Neil.

When her mother can't cope with a spider she gets Deborah to ask for help from a passing boy on a bike. Sunny - common and cheeky - plans to run discos. He drops in again for a drink, giving them a cassette player and promising them tapes. Deborah thinks that Sunny and her mother act strangely together, her mother lenient about his language and smoking.

At lunchtime the girl practice trying to levitate - they've seen hippies try it on TV.

50% through the book we learn that Deborah's a mother. It's barely mentioned again.

Sarah points out that Miss Drake, the infant teacher, has hairy legs. Rumour somehow spreads that she's a lesbian. The girls aren't all sure what a lesbian is - they like watching Miss World. Deborah finds out that Miss Drake is about to be married. The other girls are impressed.

The others see Sunny working on scaffolding and fancy him. They're impressed that he's been in Deborah's bathroom.

Deborah's mum tells her that Sunny's coming to the school fete. Deborah worries about it. She's invited to Sarah's house. It has a grand piano, and does indeed have a derelict pool. Sarah's brother-in-law to-be isn't very impressive. Sarah's 16 years older sister used to go out with a bomber.

Deborah's mum finds out that Sarah is the daughter of the girl she thinks is her older sister. Sarah doesn't seem to know. While Deborah's at Sarah's, they play with a gun, pointing it at a man. It goes off with Deborah's hand on the trigger. Sarah takes the blame. Sarah's family soon move away.

Other reviews

  • Catherine Taylor (Brilliantly articulated and often piercingly sad, Dunn’s characters find themselves caught up in what may today be termed quarter-life crises – they are unsettled, dissatisfied; prone to despair, to jealousy, to falling unsuitably in love, to deep, unnavigable loss. ... cultural references, which, while they firmly place the book in context, are a little overdone.)

Wednesday, 10 December 2025

"The Fall" by Rachael Blok

Prologue - someone's on a cathedral roof. If only they hadn't answered the phone. It all began 50 years before.

Willow Eliot (she works in a museum) delivers an exhibition (her first) to a cathedral. It's late - 1 am. She discovers that a body has fallen from the roof. Suicide? Policeman Martin (aged 45-50, from Rotterdam) is phoned. A 35 y.o. mother had fallen from the tower decades earlier.

Willow goes to her B&B which she has for the weekend. Her parents and ill grandmother (Noni) are expected. She has a dominant, married twin sister Flis who's going to be married this week in the cathedral to Sunny, a local policeman. Willow has recently split from Otis, who she'd been with for 2 years. She meets Theo again, an ex of Flis who she had a fling with.

The dead man, Joel, was about 80 - an ex-verger. His son Michael, a clergyman, lives locally with wife Heather. Michael seems to have a secret.

Willow's shown up the tower (St Alban's) by Noah, who tries to kiss her. She escapes after a tussle. Later he falls off the tower.

Flis disappears. Her smashed phone is found.

The exhibit material came from a collection by someone who received treatment in a mental hospital. Willow had collection material from other mental patients.

Joel was a wifebeater.

Jass (Joel's grandson) is seen at night dropping letters into a lake. He was also known to have argued with the 3 dead/missing people in their final hours.

Years before, a 7 y.o. twin girl, Alice, was put in a mental home for pushing her mother off the tower, though actually she'd been trying to stop Joel accost her mother.

Jass, 24, got £200k from Joel. Joel has been asking money from cured mental hospital patients in return for his silence. Jass had discovered this. Joel was trying to keep him silent. Michael has been spending money, knowing that he'll get $2 million went his father dies.

When Alice comes out of the hospital she changes her name and eventually runs a B&B. When she meets Flis she realises she's the twin sister of Flis's mother. Flis is found, Noah recovers, and the wedding goes ahead.

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