Greenwald writes that the Norwegian Rolf Jacobsen (1907-1994) "is now widely regarded as the poet who launched modernism in his country". The introduction makes several interesting points -
- "The subject [of railroads] seems inexhaustible for Jacobsen, and his meditations on it increased in complexity" (p.xiv)
- "Jacobsen's writing combines an ancient way of looking - a way that searches for connectedness - with an openness to the new" (p.xvii)
- "We learn only a little about his everyday life from his poems, and almost nothing about his personal relations" (p.xvii)
- "Nature is a powerful presence in Norway" (p.xviii)
- "Jacobsen attempts, "to create a balance between metaphor and myth, that is, between transformation and unity ... That this myth is empty is a basic condition in modernism and in the twentieth century" (Paul Borum)
- "when the poems fail, [personification] can seem to be little more than a device. But when the poems succeed, they capture a strange and delicate quality, and can sometimes give us the eerie sensation that we are being regarded" (p.xix)
- "In reading some of his early poems ... we may wonder whether the poet has detected a truth behind appearances or rather too readily fantasized an alternative existence and sailed off into it ... The notion ... crops up so often that it takes on the flavor of an escapist wish, quite aside from any insights it may offer" (p.xxii)
- "Poetry in Norwegian usually moves more slowly than poetry in English - in large part because of differences between the sound qualities of the two languages. The frequency of hard consonants, the clustering of consonants, the diphthongs and the long vowels combine to make Norwegian a language that gives one more to chew on than English does" (p.xxv)
- "Norway saw five official spelling reforms in the course of Jacobsen's lifetime" (p.xxvii)
I've never been to Norway, but I've spent a few days in Sweden. I can understand how trees, water and silence can be an intense influence, and how trains become significant, especially in winter.
He's happy to stretch a metaphor, sometimes all through a poem -
- The sky has rested its harp aslant on the earth/ and is moving the thousands of strings in deafening harmony ... Across the great, singing tapestry gentle hands weave speaking dreams. Rain was the first thing the senses grasped on the earth ("Rain")
- "The age of great symphonies is over now ... They rose toward the heavens ... Now they're pouring back down as rain ... every day on this earth that is thirsty and drinks them in again ("The Age of Great Symphonies")
- Our day ... moves off quietly for a little while,/ throws the blue coat around its shoulders,/ rinses its feet in the ocean and walks off;/ then it comes running back again, with roses on its cheeks,/ and with good, cool hands/ it lifts up your chin and looks you in the face ("Day and Night")
He likes flat lakes -
- the mirror image in the still lake ... Do I know where reality lies? Am I/ root or am I crown. Aren't these stars/ there too, made of faintly shining stone? ("The Inverted Summer")
- it's good for the mind ... to stand on your head down there a while ("Mirror Lakes")
There are Flash-like fables that can be paraphrased, with punchlines -
- "The Lonely Balcony" (from the balcony's PoV) - "it thought why can't the good Lord ... use me as a little shelf to put his knickknacks on ... they cut it down in less than 8 minutes and hung up a crackling red and blue neon advertisement for Scotch Whiskey"
- "The Archaeologist" - "when he ate his homemade sandwiches he thought slowly as he chewed that it was his own heart he was digging up today with teaspoons ... For people, he thought, have lived deep down in my darkness before me. ... Later he dug up an umbrella from an era when they didn't have umbrellas, and a monthly rail-pass to Blommenholm but that was surely his own"
Endings which are too easily mystical include -
- Sails are unfurled in the night - our dreams;/ unknown ships go by/ on oceans no one can see ("Thoughts upon listening in on a radio telescope").
- we can still manage to think ... that there's something [the woods are] hiding from us. Something they don't know yet. Beyond the sounds and sight. Truths beyond the truth ("The Media Poem")
Some miscellaneous imagery -
- And up in the light somewhere I, of course, stand and watch how/ the cigarettte's blue soul flutters like a chaste angel/ through the chestnut leaves towards eternal life ("Metaphysics of the City")
- Colors are words' little sisters. They can't become soldiers (the first line of "Cobalt")
- Express train 1256, eight soot-black cars,/ turns toward new, endlessly unknown villages./ Springs of light behind the windows, unseen wells of power along the mountains -/ these we travel past, only four minutes late/ for Marnardal ("Express Train")
- swallows dash out in wide loops in the air/ like silent strokes of a whip ("Mournful Towers")
- I believe in the dark churches, the ones that ... like deep red roses carry a fragrance/ from times that perhaps had more love ... Now they are ships ... there's no hope of being saved, but we keep sailing, sailing, sailing ("Stave Churches")
- Where do the streets go/ when there aren't any trolleys in them ("Where do streets go")
- The tree drinks its muteness from the earth,/ extends its enormous root down there like an elephant trunk/ and draws up silence/ and lifts it to the stars and the wind/ so they can taste it too./ The dead in their graves don't talk much ("Blind Song")
- Your hand at rest is an upturned boat/ pulled halfway onto the beach,/ and full of breathing as a conch's shell/ it waits for you to come back ("Small lights at sea")
- The old cities of Auvergne ... collect years as the bees collect honey/ and hide them away in their attics and in cool vaults./ They have towers that look like clenched fists/ and walls of forgotten sun ("Old cities in Auvergne")
- The veil of birds around the earth can not be seen from the satellites ... photograph our days like the orbiting spies, but they don't tell ... Seen from underneath everything is large. ... From the dead's point of view, it's you who are in heaven ("From above, from below, and from the side")
My favourite poems are "The Archaeologist" and "Some", followed by "Hallingskeid" and "The Sewing Machine".