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Showing posts with label Fiona Cummins. Show all posts
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Thursday, 19 March 2026

"Rattle" by Fiona Cummins

An audio book.

Clara (who has her middle 3 fingers missing) is abducted by the bone collector, a man whose family through generations has been collecting unusual bones. She's 5. Her mother had been against her having an operation. Her father, a doctor, has solicited under-age women in the past.

The man keeps Jakey under observation, awaiting an opportunity to abduct him too. His bone disease means that his life expectancy is 36 years. His father Erdman has been a journalist on a Psychic magazine. He gets sacked, assaulted by a gang, gets himself to hospital and disappears. His twin brother died about 30 years before of the bone disease than Jakey has. His body was stolen. His wife Lilith became an orphan in childhood.

DI Fitzroy, 37, isn't making much progress. Her father, an ex-policeman moved abroad 2 years before with his new wife. She and her partner David are about to have an appointment at a fertility hospital. But David doesn't turn up. Her sister pesters her, saying that her niece wants a visit. She decides that having a child is more important than preserving a marriage.

A year before a girl called Grace was abducted, though she wasn't known to have a bone abnormality. Now it's discovered from her mother that she had an extra pair of ribs.

Lilith finds Erdman drunk in a park. Jakey is taken to hospital because his illness has flared up. His parents go there. Jakey is abducted.

The bone collector would like to cut up a live body. He uses beetles etc to remove flesh from bones. He leaves rabbit skeletons as calling cards. The police study the skeletons and contact beetle sellers, leading them to think that the culpit works in a museum. From his PoV we learn that he has an ill wife and no children.

Erdman has worked out that the criminal works in the hospital and is the man who's been following him. He tries to find son to make up for his imperfect behaviour in the past. Fitzroy works out the hospital connection too, Brian Howley has been a cleaner for 40 years. His boss knows that his father died and left him a house. Brian suspects that they're on his trail.

Fitzroy had over-reacted during the Grace case, and is being kept away from the front line. She goes to Brian's father's house. He tells her about Grace then stabs her and carries her in. Erdman watches, and goes in to save Fitzroy. The two find the skeleton of Erdman's brother. [Would Brian really be so careless? Would they really not contact the police (who are outside the wrong house)?] There's a fire. The police arrive in time.

6 months later, Erdman and Lilith are happy together and Jakey is ok. Brian escaped from the police. Clara might still be alive. Her parents have separated. Grace is dead.

[The plot isn't always convincing. The writing's best when first-person women are worrying. "rectangular-shaped" isn't good.]

Other reviews

  • nonsenseshewrote (a mess ... Rattle‘s biggest issue is not knowing what genre it wants to be. It’s an everyday crime thriller, without any supernatural goings-on, that still owes half its page count to horror stories. ... two-thirds of the novel is spent setting up these strange goings on and the last third utterly forgetting about them. Two-thirds of the novel don’t advance the plot or the characters in any way, choosing to draw out these creepy moments instead which, ultimately, mean nothing since the story doesn’t have a supernatural resolution. ... Coincidence-driven’, ‘stupid-decision-driven’, ‘otherwise-smart-characters-making-terrible-out-of-character-decisions-to-serve-the-weak-plot-driven’, sure. But Cummins drives her characters with all the subtlety of a freight train.)
  • bibliomaniacuk (This novel flits between crime, psychological thriller and horror; nothing is ever overstated or over sensationalised, keeping the reader completely convinced and on tenterhooks from the beginning to end.)

Thursday, 19 June 2025

"All of Us Are Broken" by Fiona Cummins

An audio book.

Prologue – Some people (including Christine Hardwick) are being held at gunpoint in a lodge by a loch by Missy and Fox. Already there are 3 dead bodies. Charlie is her ex-husband though why she reminisces about their honeymoon at this time is a puzzle.

Christine has driven from Essex to Scotland with the 2 children, stopping off at her ex-husband’s parents. Gaylen, her daughter, is thought to be boring by her classmates.

Miss Melissa Smith is a teacher on probation. Gerrard has proposed to her. Melissa likes neither teaching nor Gerrard. There's an accident at school. Melissa walks out and phones her ex - Dasheel Lloyd – an ex-convict. They've not met for 2 years. They drive north, killing and stealing on the way. We get a bio of each victim. They call each other Missy and Fox.

Policeman Talbot couldn’t cope with a dead body that he's found. Suicide? No - no gun at the scene. Saul, a colleague tries to help him. Saul’s sometimes sleeping with Blue (who’d been raped by a policeman Lynch). Blue looks at some handwriting at the scene. The man is Melissa's stepfather, and Melissa's handwritten note is there.

Fox was guilty of manslaughter. Released at 20. His mum was an alcoholic.

Blue has narcolepsy. Saul treats his boss O'Neill as a father figure. He's without family now. When he and Blue returned to his house, dozens of dead chicks had been scattered around his bedroom. She knows something about it but won't say.

O’Neill has told Saul (and only Saul) that Melissa is his daughter. Her stepfather (who she killed) had caused her to have an abortion. She wants notoriety - Bonnie and Clyde.

Gaylen (13) found her father dead. She has juvenile Huntingdon’s, inherited from her father.

Police surround the lodge. Saul decides to go in early, unarmed. He's shot but saves the kids. Fox kills Missie then is shot. “All of us are broken." saays Blue to Saul after, "It’s how we put ourselves together”. At the end, Saul and Blue killed Lynch (by getting a seagull to attack him?)

3 months later, Gaylen’s Huntingdon’s has progressed rapidly. She has months left. The family go to see dolphins near where tragedy happened – her wish, and probably her last trip.

Other reviews

  • goodreads
  • crimefictionlover (a frustrating read. It boasts myriad strong plot lines and a cast of well drawn characters, against a lavishly rendered landscape but something doesn’t quite gel. Is it the embarrassment of riches in the plotting department? There’s enough here for two, if not three, cracking good books. Or is it the fact that Saul Anguish is so hard to find any empathy with? His tendency to steal little bits of evidence from crime scenes is both annoying and unrealistic, as is Blue’s narcolepsy, which would surely stop her from working.)