Literary reviews by Tim Love.
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Showing posts with label George Saunders. Show all posts
Showing posts with label George Saunders. Show all posts

Saturday, 3 February 2018

"Lincoln in the Bardo" by George Saunders (Bloomsbury, 2017)

Having not been dazzled by his short stories I didn't rush to read this despite the awards it's been receiving. When I was given this book for Xmas I thought I'd give it a go.

Initially there's a conversation between various named people, who turn out to be dead, in Limbo (rather than their names appearing before what they say - as in a screenplay - they appear after). The spirit world is a dynamic place - "She rapidly transmuted into the fallen bridge, the vulture, the large dog, the terrible hag gorging on black cake, the stand of flood-ravaged corn, the umbrella ripped open by a wind we could not feel" (p.37)

Back in the land of the living a meal put on by Lincoln is described using only quotes from books - "Drunken men examined paintings rather too intensely" (p.17). Section V is all about the moon at the party - quotes again. There's no master narrator.

Willie Lincoln (10 years old) dies, joins the spirits. The spirits are shocked when his father appears, lifting Willie's body from the tomb. Willie becomes a minor celebrity. Limbo bursts into beauty when the angels arrive to take people away (when people move on there's a "familiar yet always bone-chilling fire-sound of the matterlightblooming phenomenon"). The angels (or are they devils?) appear in a different guise to each spirit. Willie resists them because he wants to see his father again. The spirits think this is a bad idea. They track down Lincoln hoping to influence him (though they doubt if it's possible). On p.152 we return to quoted memoirs etc, to find out how Lincoln's coping with life's realities. Section LXII has quotes about Lincoln's appearance - blue eyes, grey eyes; brown hair, black hair; ugly, handsome.

When the spirits gather they start exchanging stories about their deaths, their corpses. They talk about why they're still in Limbo (some don't know) and discuss the connections between the spirit world and reality. By overlapping their bodies with those of the living they can sense the thoughts of the living, and of each other. They try in unison to encourage the boy to leave Limbo. And he does, along with some others caught up in the frenzy. Before they go, they shape-change through a sequence of selves - who they had been, who they could have become.

It's roughly 340 pages long with lots of white space. For example, here (minus the attributions) is all of p.159 - "Sad/ Very sad. Especially given what we knew./ His boy was not "In some bright place, free of suffering."/ No. / Not "resplendent in a new mode of being."/ Au contraire./ Above us, an errant breeze loosened many storm-broken branches./ Which fell to the earth at various distances". In section LX the layout changes - there's reported speech, so the dialogue on p.185 is far more compact. That type of layout occasionally returns.

As luck would have it, I've recently read The New World by Chris Adrian and Eli Horowitz, which also features Limbo, and spirits not wanting to move on. It has more Real World sections than this book has, more humour, and more cryogenics.

Other reviews

  • Sheenagh Pugh
  • Hari Kunzru (Lincoln in the Bardo feels like a blend of Victorian gothic with one of the more sfx-heavy horror franchises. ... One of the novel’s conceits is that by occupying the same space, the spirits can experience a dissolution of interpersonal boundaries, understanding and feeling sympathy for each other in a mystical way. It is hard to be specific without spoiling the plot, but Saunders uses this device to imply a cause for Lincoln’s later signing of the emancipation proclamation, a move that seems glib and reductive, a blemish on a book that otherwise largely manages to avoid sentiment and cliche. This is a small quibble. Lincoln in the Bardo is a performance of great formal daring.)
  • Anthony Cummins (Saunders gives us a barrel-load of his typically bizarre conceits, but to what end? Willie's fate after death is plainly meant to be the focus, but the jeopardies on offer are drama-drainingly opaque and finnicky to the point of equivalence)
  • John Self (Much of Saunders’s work shows how people use words to obscure rather than explain, and his language is typically compact and coded as a result. In Lincoln in the Bardo people say what they mean, so, despite the highly original conceit, this is the most straightforward fiction he has written. Its looseness means it is easy to read, but it feels attenuated, at 350 pages less weighty than the best of his stories. Leave it to George Saunders always to surprise us, showing us here that a book can be at the same time a delight and something of a disappointment.)
  • Goodreads

Saturday, 17 June 2017

"Tenth of December" by George Saunders (Bloomsbury, 2013)

Here's the start of the first story, "Victory Lap"

Three days shy of her fifteenth birthday, Alison Pope paused at the top of the stairs.
Say the staircase was marble. Say she descended and all heads turned. Where was {special one}? Approaching now, bowing slightly, he exclaimed, How can so much grace be contained in one small package? Oops. He he said small package? And just stood there?

We are inside Alison's fantasising mind (on p.7 there's "Was she special? Did she consider herself special? Oh, gosh, she didn't know"). On p.10 the PoV switches to Kyle Boot. 3rd person. He has a rule-making, point-tallying father. He sees someone with a knife trying to abduct Alison. On p.18 the PoV switches to the abductor. On p.21 we're back to Kyle, deciding whether to intercede. p.23 returns us to the abductor. Kyle knocks the abductor out. On p.25, from Alison's PoV, she watches as Kyle's poised to deliver a killing blow to the abductor. Dare she intercede?

Sticks" is about a page long, about a father's quirk.

"Puppy" continues the parenting theme - "When Bo got older, it would be different. Then he'd need his freedom. But now he just needed not to get killed" (p.35), thinks the mother. "when you said you were going to do a thing and didn't do it, that was how kids got into drugs" (p.36) thinks the father. A mother called Marie visits someone's house with her kids to look at an advertised puppy. The kids want it, but she notices a boy (Bo, we deduce) chained to a tree in the yard, drinking from a dog's bowl.

In "Escape for Spiderhead" criminals join a drugs test to get out of prison, using Verbaluce™, VeriTalk™, Chatease™, Darkenfloxx™, Vivistif™, etc to see if Love is real. Jeff, the main character, kills himself and becomes omniscient. That story, and "Exhortation" (a management pep-talk) and "Al Roosten" (Al becomes guilty about the envy he acted upon at a charity auction) don't work for me.

"The Semplica Girl Diaries" is in the form of a journal. A father, having gone to a rich friend's party, decides for the sake of his children that he should do better. He wins a lottery prize and splashes out on her daughter's birthday party by buying a string of 4 Semplica Girls - immigrants - to decorate the garden. The younger daughter frees them, resulting in possible financial ruin.

In "Home" a war-vet visits his ma as the bailiffs arrive. He's envious of his sibling's and remarried ex's homes. He struggles to contain his anger.

"My Chivalric Fiasco" - the boss of a place that sets up period recreations (imitation pigs, fake snow that had to be vacuumed up afterwards) promotes 2 people (Ted, the main character, and Martha) to pay for their silence. Ted has KnightLyfe® to help him play his new role, after which the language goes Disney-medieval - "Ted, I swear to God, quoth he. Put a sock in it or I will flush you down the shitter so fast" (p.211).

"Tenth of December", the title story, is online. It throws us into a strange context. Here's paragraph 2

Today’s assignation: walk to pond, ascertain beaver dam. Likely he would be detained. By that species that lived amongst the old rock wall. They were small but, upon emerging, assumed certain proportions. And gave chase. This was just their methodology. His aplomb threw them loops. He knew that. And revelled it. He would turn, level the pellet gun, intone: Are you aware of the usage of this human implement?

Blam!

They were Netherworlders. Or Nethers.

These aliens speak Disney-Cockney. But are they aliens? One of them, Eber, is trying to kill himself by walking coatless into the cold wildness - "This was too much. He hadn’t cried after the surgeries or during the chemo, but he felt like crying now ... This incredible opportunity to end things with dignity was right in his hands. ... All he had to do was stay put. I will fight no more forever. Concentrate on the beauty of the pond, the beauty of the woods, the beauty you are returning to, the beauty that is everywhere as far as you can—". A kid, trying to save him, falls through the ice. Eber saves him without him realising. The boy stumbles home, then remembering the old man, begins to return to the ice. Eber sees him - "The kid came out of the kitchen, lost in Eber’s big coat, pajama pants pooling around his feet with the boots now off. He took Eber’s bloody hand gently. Said he was sorry. Sorry for being such a dope in the woods. Sorry for running off. He’d just been out of it. Kind of scared and all.". Eber ends up more content with life.

I think the title story's the best in the book. I also like "Victory Lap", "Sticks", "Home", and "My Chivalric Fiasco" too.

Other reviews

  • Tom Cox
  • Gregory Cowles (Class anxiety is everywhere here. ... By tapping into the running interior monologues of his hopeful, fragile characters, Saunders creates a signature voice that’s simultaneously baroque and demotic — a trick he pulls off by recognizing just how florid our ordinary thoughts can be, how grandiose and delusional and self-­serving)
  • Joel Lovell (The characters speak in a strange new language — a kind of heightened bureaucratese, or a passively received vernacular that is built around self-improvement clichés ... “The Semplica Girl Diaries” [] took him more than a dozen years to write ... “Semplica Girls” is a perfect illustration of the point where Saunders the technically experimental wizard and Saunders the guy whose heart exists outside of his body converge. It’s science fiction of the highest order.)
  • Leyla Sanai
  • Michael Shaub