My first Dickens. First impression was how little visual description there is, how linguistic the analogies are, how hard it would be to put on screen without voice-overs
- "there was a wilderness of empty casks, which had a certain sour remembrance of better days lingering about them; but it was too sour to be accepted as a sample of the beer that was gone"
- "blackbeetles ...groped about the hearth in a ponderous way, as if they were short-sighted and hard of hearing, and not on terms with one another"
- "Joe felt, as I did, that he had made a point there, and he pulled hard at his pipe to keep himself from weaking it by repetition.
'You see, Pip,' Joe pursued, as soon as he was past that danger"
I didn't find the 1st chapter very atmospheric, and Pip isn't overwhelmed by what seems to be his first trip to London (maybe his first trip to a city). Later however, descriptive passages are more common.
Where there could be detail (Pip's age at certain points, dimensions of rooms, etc) analogies are used instead.
I expected characters early in the novel to reappear later, but having them interrelated by marriage is over-closured?
Intrusions like "Whom I can see now, as I write" (p.247) are rare and perhaps expendable.
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