Had I but world enough, and time, I'd read the 90+ pages of poetry here because a skim suggests there are interesting parts. The long and the short of it is that I think I'd have to edit as I go along for it to suit me. Here's the start of the first (4 page) poem
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It was just after the announcement, over the tannoy that religion had ended, that I felt the overwhelming compulsion to depart it, heaven. - And why, still, today, in this chair I descend. |
I don't get the line-breaks, the indentation, or even the punctuation. There are 3 line and 4 line poems too, which I think I prefer.
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