Literary reviews by Tim Love.
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Saturday, 1 November 2025

"Towards the winter solstice" by Timothy Steele (Swallow Press, 2006)

Poems from Kenyon review, Measure, Poetry, Southwest review, Threepenny review, etc. Unsurprisingly there are many iambics and lots of rhyming. I liked his "Missing Measures" book and have recommended it to people. I doubt that I'll recommend this book to non-formalists. I'm not used to reading such poetry nowadays, but I don't think that's the reason why some of it sounds pedestrian to me. E.g. -

The square had otherwise, a leafless tree
And litter's swirling, sad agility;
And densely packed surrounding buildings made
The place, save at mid-day, a cheerless shade.
(p.7)

"In the Memphis Airport" we see that

Some draw wheeled suitcases along
Or from a beeping belt or purse
Apply a cell phone to an ear;
Some pause at banks of monitors
Where times and gates for flight appear

"April 27, 1937" is 42 lines about the dangers of war. I don't sense much wisdom in the piece. E.g. -

That day in Spain has taught us to our cost,
That there are lines that never should be crossed;
The ignorance of leaders is not bliss
If they're intent on tempting Nemisis

From "Didelphis Virginiana", about roadkill, we learn that

Many such creatures perish daily, nothing
In evolution having readied them
Against machinery: grief seems absurd.
Nature herself, ever pragmatic, is
Blithely indifferent to her child's departure

Maybe I've failed to interpret the intended tone. This sounds light -

Meanwhile the garden's thriving: rows once strict
Are now a rioting of salad greens;
Zucchinis threaten that, if left unpicked,
They'll burgeon to the size of submarines;
(p.56)

And this isn't saying anything new -

In such rich warmth, it's easy to relax
And hard to credit calendars and clocks,
Which register, among their other facts,
The shorter days, the coming equinox
(p.57)

I liked "The Sweet Peas" the most. From "Didelphis Virginiana" this is attractive - A mockingbird displays his wings, like someone/ Opening the panels of an overcoat/ To show he's come unarmed and should be trusted. And this section is better than most -

But we best loved stars rising here and there,
Whether from hopes of something we might sow
Or from a lonely impulse to declare
The kinship of the lofty and the low
(p.61)

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