32 A5 pages. 13 poems from "Magma", "The Big Issue", etc. Quite a lot of 'recognition humour' and the odd good line, but quite a lot of baggage too. The rhyming wasn't aways helpful. Here are 2 examples of the better material
The evening was approaching, afternoon ready to chuck in its soiled towel, any moment now. Outside a nonchalant moon clocked in, the shadows began their many smoky chores - |
The intended boom-mic-in-shot edginess was nothing more than Amateur Hour. |
p.32 has as typo 'with it's own"
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