Literary reviews by Tim Love.
Warning: Rather than reviews, these are often notes in preparation for reviews that were never finished, or pleas for help with understanding pieces. See Litref Reviews - a rationale for details.

Wednesday, 4 March 2026

"Mary; or, the Birth of Frankenstein" by Anne Eekhout

An audio book.

We learn about Mary when she's at Geneva in 1816 with Shelley, Byron, Dr John Polidori and her stepsister Claire. Shelley's into free love. She isn't. Her daughter died. She now has a little boy, William, still breast-feeding. Byron challenges them to write a ghost story.

We also see her at Scotland in 1812 when she was in her mid-teens, staying with the Baxter family. She has a skin condition. She's friendly (intimate) with Isabella, whose mother has died. Isabella's into witches, ghosts and sea monsters. While they're out together they see a humanoid beast (or was it a shared hallucination?). It's rumoured that the local brewer, Mr Booth (who'd been married to Isabella's sister, who died) conducts experiments on life. Mary's warned about Isabella - is she a witch?

She's familiar with Gothic horror stories and Galvani's frog experiments. Mary's famous mother died days after Mary was born. At the end she leave Scotland in one time-line (her skin better, Isabella planning to marry Mr Booth, abandoning Mary) and leaves Geneva in the other timeline (Shelley's father will provide support only if she returns). Claire is pregnant. Byron's likely to be the father but maybe Shelley could be. Her Frankenstein story has barely been started.

Lots of sections seem slow to me. It feels like the majority of the text is involved with the Scotland scenario. I don't mind the lack of action, it's the psychological/character development that stalls.

Other reviews

  • Isabela Torezan (What I found most beautiful in this story, though, was not the delicate description of Mary’s love life, from Isabella to Percy, or the sad but surely moving portrait of motherhood. For me, it is Mary’s salvation through writing, the way she realises that her story, her monster, her writing powers were what made her who she was and nobody could take that from her. Writing, alone, makes her a woman, a mother, and a living being)
  • theresasmithwrites (The scenes at Geneva read almost like a fever dream, an immersion into the way in which they were all drinking heavily, laudanum mixed with wine, the consequential heightening of everyone’s faculties, and the raging storms all converging into a highly charged atmosphere. )
  • Liesbeth D’Hoker (Unfortunately, her straightforward style leaves too little of Mary’s complex mind unturned. ... Her superficial dialogues and explanatory one-liners render a reductive image of a woman who is a victim of her time, of her context, and of the men who surround her. Eekhout’s poor style also prevents the creation of a layered and intellectual character. At times the syntax is of toe-curling simplicity ... Eekhout deviates from the biographical facts on several important points ... It is also quite clever how Eekhout plays with different genres. She mixes coming-of-age passages with horror stories and folk legends and concocts strange scenes that soar with tension. Much less successful are the passages that she overwhelms with psychological platitudes)
  • Ray Palen

Tuesday, 3 March 2026

"Other people" by Peter Campion (Univ of Chicago Press, 2005)

Poems from AGNI, PN Review (5 of them), Poetry, Southwest Review, TriQuarterly, etc.

This is another book that's beyond my understanding. I can't work out what the poet's aims are. There's quite a lot of rhyme - e.g.

when you called to tell how, after 2:00,
as you searched that club you'd played to find your case,
a pane of glass propped out of view
sliced you, made my imagination race

Note that retrospectively it's clear that "2:00" is pronounced "two", and that there doesn't seem to be much of a syllabic/stress pattern.

Other reviews

  • Robert Pinsky (Closeness of the uncanny to the quotidian is Peter Campion’s kind of material. ... )

Monday, 2 March 2026

"The Blue Hour" by Paula Hawkins

An audio book.

James Becker is the curator of the Fairburn foundation's works. He never knew his father. His mother was an artist who died from cancer when he was young. His boss is Sebastian. James' pregnant wife Helena was once engaged to Seb.

Tate Modern has contacted the Fairburn foundation because they discovered that an art piece the Tate borrowed from them contains a human bone. Becker knows a lot about the artist's work - his mother liked the artist's work too. He drives to Eris where she used to live. Vanessa Chapman, the artist, died of cancer 5 years before, leaving her work to the Fairburn foundation - a surprise because they were her enemy for a time. Grace (once the local doctor then her live-in carer) is her executor who's been slow passing on the diaries and notebooks. She lives on Eris, which is an island some of the day. She and James begin to trust each other. She tells him she helped Vanessa with a morphine overdose at the end. He tells her that Seb's mother Emmaline killed his father Douglas (Vanessa's agent). Vanessa's husband Julian once sold a work of hers to pay his gambling debts. He disappeared along with his car about 20 years before.

We learn about events partly from Vanessa's journals. Grace once saved Vanessa from a rapist.

Seb thinks that Grace is holding onto some works of art and some diaries. Grace wasn't given any art-works in the will though she was given the island and house. Maybe she's hiding evidence that would show her in a bad light?

When Julian last visited the island, he asked Vanessa for money. They slept together. Grace (who fancied beautiful Vanessa) left the house in disgust. Vanessa later left to see (and sleep with) her agent. Did Julian trash Vanessa's paintings and sculptures when he was alone in the house? No. Actually, Grace killed him when he humiliated her, then trashed some works. We learn more about Grace - how she felt rejected by her parents, then her student house-mates. After finding the arts vandalised, Vanessa told her not to return to the house because she knew too much. When Vanessa discovered she had cancer she begged Grace to come back.

James visits again. Grace gets him to stay the night, hiding his car keys. He begins to thinks that Helena and Seb are having an affair. Grace tells James that Vanessa killed Julian. James is phonGraceed and told that the bone isn't Julian's. It's from Nick, who he knows was a student friend of Grace. In a flashback we learn that Nick visited Grace pretending that after drugs/women problems he wanted to be friends with her again, but he ended up humiliating her. She hadn't planned to kill him but when the chance arose, she did. Then she kills James.

In general I liked the writing, (and how Grace gradually became the central figure, she and James having much in common), though -

  • When James (his PoV) is on the phone to the Tate we learn that "the man on the phone exhaled audibly". I've seen this phrase before. It irritates me more than it should. Why is the word "audibly" there?
  • About 80 mins from the end there's "reached for Grace's hand ... dropping Vanessa's hand .. the cutter between her hand" then "intent on the task at hand". Too many hands.
  • Scenes are repeated from different PoVs. Fair enough, though sometimes the differences are barely worth it.

Other reviews

  • Fiona Sturges
  • bookliterati
  • Vicky Leigh ( ‘Blue Hour’, despite being written from three different perspectives again, was much easier to follow. It feels like a two hander, between Grace and Becker.)
  • Goodreads - many disappointed readers

Sunday, 1 March 2026

"Dwelling places" by David Ferry (Univ of Chigaco Press, 1993)

Poems from Agni, Harvard Magazine, The New Republic, Partisan Review, Ploughshares, Raritan, etc. Many of the pieces are translations/adaptions - of Goethe, Rilke, Baudelaire, etc. My favourite poem was Mnemosyne (Hölderlin) though most of the pieces were way beyond me. In general, I don't understand why there are so many words. Here for example is part of "In the garden" - The whole plucked stalk is an event in time:/ a number of blossoms one above the other,/ but some blossoms more fully out than others,/ in an intricately regular scale or series./ Of course, since the flower is plucked, it isn't really/ an event in time, but only the record of an event.

Saturday, 28 February 2026

"A Botanical Daughter" by Noah Medlock

An audio book.

1889. Simon (taxidermist) and Gregor (botanist) live on a Buckinghamshire estate. They're lovers. Gregor receives a package from the East. It includes a fungus which shows signs of awareness. Their cleaner Jenny had a best friend Connie who recently killed herself, people say. Gregor and Simon dig up the body to use as substrate for the fungus and other plants. Simon thinks that it wasn't a suicide. Jenny suspects that Gregor and Simon are lovers. The locals thinks that too, and that Jenny is a lesbian.

Chloe, the new hybrid creature, develops. Simon likes the idea of he and Gregor having a child, andChloe could be it. Gregor is keen for botantic fame. They give Chloe a voice-box. Jenny notices that Connie's body has been dug up. The men tell her about their experiment and that it's female. They invite her to live with them.

Julian Malory (an old rival - and lover? - of Gregor) is now president of the Royal Horticultural Society. He's married. Gregor invites him to stay then disposes of him. Chloe and Jenny fall in love and run away to the watermill cottage where Jenny and her father lived. They make love there. Jenny's father is killed and Chloe absorbs Jenny. Chloe's spreading. The men transfer her to a special, sealed greenhouse built on their estate, with a copy of the cottage.

An interesting attempt. It's a historical novel (is "weaponised" an appropriate word to use?), it's gay (though we learn little of the characters' inmost thoughts), and it's Gothic fantasy/horror (though I'd have expected the hybrid to have induced more fear. Jenny's reaction is a particular surprise). Gregor murders too easily.

Other reviews

  • Fiona Denton ( felt like I was left wanting in terms of characterisation. Although not all characters (Jennifer in particular felt very well formed and I genuinely cared for her), but certainly for our protagonists I often did not believe the plausibility of their choices or actions)
  • AJ Reardon (I compare this book [with] the other two queer Frankenstein pastiches I’ve read in the past year (Unwieldy Creatures by Addie Tsai and Our Hideous Progeny by C.E. McGill) ... I couldn’t stand Gregor and how he treated the other characters. ... I also noticed that the characters, especially Gregor and Simon, seemed to change their opinions about things kind of on a whim, as if the author felt like he had to keep switching up their views so they could be on opposite sides of the issue.)
  • the fiction fox (The personalities they did have were fairly one-dimensional and a few “change-of-mind-moments” and character interactions fell flat for me as a result. In particular, the falling out between Gregor and Simon over Chloe’s “monstrous nature” felt unearned. Neither of them had expressed such strong opinions beforehand, so the emotional change of heart felt too abrupt. Secondly, some of the themes I mentioned I loved were also explored too shallowly for my liking. With the set-up created, there was so much more emotional and ethical depth to be explored here)
  • queercrossroads (Gregor [is] a man of great intellect; a sullen and withdrawn academic, akin to Frankenstein in many ways, obsessed with the creation of life ... In true Gothic fashion, their reason for isolation is an air of general ‘unease’ rather than a rational and tangible problem, despite there being one in this case ... In Simon, despite manipulation and lies thrust upon him throughout by his secretive counterpart, we see the voice of reason. The way he provides care for Gregor who, in turn, understands Simon and his eccentricities, shows a fulfilling gay relationship between two soft, warm and neurodivergent-coded POV characters. It is through this relationship that the two are redeemed)

Friday, 27 February 2026

"The Patient" by Jasper DeWitt

An audio book presented as blog posts with only the names changed.

Set in the US. Parker the narrator has a partner Jocelyn. His mother had mental problems. He has an Ivy League degree. He gets a job in an asylum. Joe has been there since 1973 when he was 6. He's in his 20s now. The narrator decides to cure him. People discourage him - previous doctors who treated him (Including Dr G, the narrator's boss) have had problem. A nurse, Nessie, who's known him from the start, has recently killed herself. After interviewing Jo the narrator believes that Joe is a victim of the system - a cashcow, a scapegoat who's been given bad doctors on purpose. He thinks that Nessie knew this and killed herself with guilt. He tries to help Jo escape but his plan is foiled - because Jo spills the beans.

His boss and Dr A, the first doctor who dealt with Jo, fill Parker in on the case. They'd even tried exorcism. He visits Jo's widowed, rich mother and finds a child's corpse behind the wall. He deduces that the thing in the asylum wasn't human. It escapes. Jo's mother kills herself. Dr A is killed. Parker starts up a private practice to treat children who are possessed.

Thursday, 26 February 2026

"Other people's comfort keeps me up at night" by Morgan Parker (Corsair books, 2021)

Poems from PANK, The Literary Review, Tin House, etc. Some poems have punctuation, some don't. Some have long lines, some have short ones. There are extra spaces between some words. It all seems rather random to me, like most of the line-breaks. One poem is double-spaced.

There's an introduction which didn't help me much - "while Beyoncé wants no part in the God talk, she has no issue with Queen and demands you bow. Morgan's project is Morgan. Morgan doesn't want God's problems. Queens for the most part suck.". Here are just a few of the many passages that baffled me -

  • how the truth can feel like/ ant hills their sandy curves their tiny crests/ like nipples what I really want to ask is/ what do you think of the idea of progress/ and is it an injury I can fix (p.1)
  • I strip down to a woman./ What is a woman?/ Women/ are a problem with a name. Girl,/ bye./ Power is money and my body (p.30)
  • In this equation everyone stands for me./ Oh you in your strikened pose!/ Oh fly honey baby/ on the run and on the market! It's like pictures are words/ or sex is a Xerox machine (p.58)
  • For now we are taking/ someone's grandma's pills/ I am slicing a wedge of brie/ with a comically large blade/ We walk a windy canyon and are safe/ Someone asks where the blood on the floor came from (p.74)
  • Dawn is foggy/ an infinite blue stomach/ a child/ learning the function/ of a verb (p.94)