Literary reviews by Tim Love.
Warning: Rather than reviews, these are often notes in preparation for reviews that were never finished, or pleas for help with understanding pieces. See Litref Reviews - a rationale for details.

Wednesday, 4 February 2026

"The infernal garden" by Gregory Leadbetter (Nine arches press, 2025)

Poems from Poetry Birmingham, Bad Lilies, Under the Radar, Poetry Ireland, Wild Court, etc.

The trilogy of Self, voice/sounds and the written word appear in several of the poems, especially at endings. Sometimes it is Nature's voice (rather than a human's) that appears from a void -

  • Then, as the river turned to flow, it was real
    and what the broken water said, I heard.
    It rose, as if a wish had kept its word,
    to breathe the earth - submerged, and let the river heal. (p.38)
  • I try to call down the contours of sound
    whose words are like those of a bird
    ...
    The air and its instrument alphabet,
    the neume that calls back to the bird. (p.43)
  • It doesn't matter who I am, nor that my lips
    speak and close before you see them move. (p.47)
  • the glass cell
    of spoken thought:
    a self uttermost
    inside a space
    as far as a human
    voice is thrown. (p.51)
  • And so, in his words, the dark
    speeds from his throat as the silence
    that breaks to surround his tongue.
    It is where he listens: the rift
    where the speaker enters his speech -
    where the I is heard and hidden. (p.59)
  • Let us slip the habits
    of ourselves and reap the silence
    that of its nothing grows (p.85)

Some other poems end with a statement about the failure to express -

  • The nests that sowed the world
    with young are empty, and the young are lost
    on wings too new to know, calling
    for the broken heaven of the speckled blue egg
    I keep as a secret and cannot let go (p.25)
  • The rain has sifted pale Saharan dust
    in desert powders ghosting water's trails
    across the sun-drowned day's midsummer crust.
    The air remembers how to move but fails. (p.27)
  • Trees half-spoken in a winter mist
    start to walk in a distant speech

    that stills again when they are seen
    a few steps nearer to the ear they reach (p.73)
  • The bunting has vanished into the art of its plumage
    but, like the cry out of sight, is nonetheless
    real unseen, for being both feather and veil.
    The man in the hide, out of reach of his language,
    is blown on the notes that rise through the reeds to the ear (p.77)

The language is usually elevated, with a wide vocabulary -

  • Those figures at work in the wound of a fen
    I see from a train have cut the skin
    of the several worlds with the same precision
    as the sacred geometry of the first propylon (p.18)
  • Weird as a withered human foot
    once held to be that of a saint -
    refuse from a reliquary pillaged
    for the jewelled slipper it had worn -
    this fallen oak, all bole, its branches
    long since lopped by the dead
    for the dead, lies like the uncut hull
    of a Bronze Age boat on the lost shore
    of its flickering field. (p.37)
  • had not been seen since human fires
    burned so low they let the night
    etch the mind with all its stars (p.74)

Tuesday, 3 February 2026

"Selected Poems” by Kate Clanchy (Picador, 2014)

Poems from Ambit, Magma, Poetry Review, Rialto, etc. collected from her 3 books - "Slattern", "Samarkand" and "Newborn".

First, some generalisations -

  • In "Speculation", an eclipse is due - a dark "counter for the highest stakes" is about to slide over a brighter one. The persona's been told for safety's sake to watch backwards, in a mirror. This is compared to a relationship - "I thought of how it is with us - I stare, you turn away and flush." So the title refers to predictions about love as well as about gambling and the eclipse. Like many of her pieces, it's an extended metaphor.
  • "Speculation" is 4 5-lined stanzas. Like most of her poems, it's made of equally sized rectangles. In this well-crafted poem I think the stanza-breaks are significant, as are many of the line-breaks. Hoever, most of the poems have fairly arbitrary shapes - line-breaks have to be ignored otherwise they're distracting. "Mendings" for example is printed as 22 short-lined triplets, but could have been couplets or prose.
  • She's good at snapshots of relationships - the poems on p.18-21 capture moments. And there are moving (or soppy) soundbites - "Patagonia" ends with "When I spoke of Patagonia, I meant// skies all empty aching blue. I meant/ years. I meant all of them with you."
  • "Grace Ethel must have heard it fall/ and thrash: a rush like love, at first,/ then a nagging, migrainous pulse,/ then a flutter like a faulty value/ in the chimney's hidden ventricle" (p.68, about finding a bird's skeleton up a chimney). There are many things "like love" in the book, even if they're not labelled as such.
  • In my comments on 'Samarkand' that I wrote in 1999, I ended with "If she started writing short stories I fear her poetry production might cease." Maybe I had in mind poems like "The Bridge Over the Border" which starts with "Here, I should surely think of home -/ my country and the neat steep town/ where I grew up: its banks of cloud,/ the winds and changing, stagey light,/ its bouts of surly, freezing rain, or failing that,// the time the train stuck here half an hour./ It was hot, for once"
  • Many of the poems from "Newborn" deal with situations common to new parents, situations that are often written about. All of the poems have something to say, but I don't think it always needs a whole poem/page to say it. The first ultrasound scan of the foetus is often awe-inspiring for parents, and poem-inspiring for poets. It's hard to believe there's anything new to say on the topic. "Scan" doesn't do a bad job considering, but it doesn't do enough. An exception is "Miscarriage, Midwinter" (a companion piece to "One, Two"), where a mother is playing with her toddler outside - "For weeks we've been promised/ snow ... I'm trying to scrape/ some together, to mould just/ the head of the world's smallest/ snowman, but it's too cold/ and it powders like ash in my hand"

Now some miscellaneous comments -

  • I like "Slattern" and "Raspberries" (a loose sonnet) most
  • I like "the child who trailed her sister like a slow-to-take-off kite" (p.56)
  • I can see that some poems have more to them than I can comprehend. "Deep Blue" for example, may have allusions to "The Seventh Seal". I know that a famous chess computer was called "Deep Blue", and the poem is dedicated to John Blau (i.e. Blue).
  • I like "you/ are putting me on, easily,/ the way a foot puts on a shoe" ("One, Two"). The persona is a woman sensing her ten-celled embryo.

Monday, 2 February 2026

"The Venetian Venture" by Suzette A. Hill

An audio book.

1950s. Rosy Gilchrist has been sent to Venice by her boss at the British Museum, Dr Stanley, to find a book of Horace translations annotated by Bodger. While she's there she discovers that an eccentric has offered $1 million for it, and a vase goes with it. Oxford (a descendent of Bodger) want it too. They send Edward Jones (24, from a good family but short of money) to look for it. He has a sister Lucia who lives in Venice. She knows Professor Cedric Dillworthy and Felix Smythe (a florist) who are in Venice to look after Felix's cousin's dog Caruso. Bill Hewson, an American painter is there, and Carlo Ricardo - once in an English PoW camp.

A bookseller is killed. Edward is found struggling in a canal. Bill jumps in to save him, in vain. Cedric thinks that Bill's efforts look more like trying to drown than save. Lucia, Edward's sister, isn't too upset - he'd always been a pain. Rosy thinks she's found the book but it's identied as a fake. The vase has been seen at Bill's studio. An unsent letter to Bill from Edward is found, which looks like a blackmail threat.

Felix and Guy are tied up. Bill threatens Rosy. Bill is the baddy, The bookseller had helped make a fake. Guy and Felix save her. Guy and Bill die. Felix disposes of the bodies using a gondola. There's a paragraph where Rosy recalls the episode as an 80 year old in a care home - strange. There's a funeral, and Rosy gets the book in the end for nothing.

Too many of the characters come straight from a farce cast. I'd like some of the characters to feel something. And I'd like more of the atmosphere of Venice to come through, not just some details.

Other reviews

Sunday, 1 February 2026

"Roundabout of death" by Faysal Khartash

An audio book set in Aleppo, Syria, 2012.

1st (Jomaa, once a teacher) and 3rd person. Intellectuals and coffee bars, whores, soldiers, black-marketeers, children from raided villages.

Snipers from minarets, carbombs, fighter planes, suicide bombers, Russian rifles.

Streets which change allegiance overnight. Trouble visiting his mother. Bribes.

His son is arrested, abused, released. Jomaa goes to Raka, hoping to rent a house there, to get away. It's changed since he last visited. ISIS have taken over. A man come on his bus, asks each woman who her guardian is (one of them is being accompanied by her 12 year old daughter), cuts fingernails of the passengers if they're too long, threatens the bus driver who should have checked. 3 heads hang from the clock-tower. He meets Baha by chance, a friend he first met in Paris, who once dreamt of a film career. They have a meal. Next morning he's disappeared on a Jihad mission - he's been trained. Jomaa decides to go back home.

He feels lumps on his head - something to do with sex. Strange. The translator tries to explain them in their notes. I'm not convinced.

Saturday, 31 January 2026

"In the hollow of the wave" by Nina Mingya Powles (Nine arches press, 2025)

Poems from Poetry Review, Magma, etc

Beyond me. I liked "Snow fragment", "Dog-hearted" and "Blue trees".

Other reviews

  • Rebecca Tamas (The book also deftly engages with the uneasy beauty of nature during a time of ecological crisis, drawing on her upbringing in Aotearoa New Zealand to create vividly unsettling images of a changing world)
  • Jade Cuttle (At first, the collection seems more interested in fabric than any form of terra firma. ... But then a shift – subtle but sure – towards more consequential themes occurs.)

Friday, 30 January 2026

"The Crossroads" by Niccolò Ammaniti

An audio book.

Cristiano (13) is woken by his drunk 37 y.o. father Reno Zena. The neighbour's dog is barking. His father gives Cristiano a gun and tells him to kill it - Reno doesn't like the owner Castordan anyway.

Quattro Formaggio, a bit slow, has assembled a giant nativity scene from found parts. Reno had protected Quattro Formaggi ("the idiot") from when they were in the chidren's home.

Teresa has left Dannilo because he's an alcoholic and he was responsible for their daughter's death. Danillo's planning a bankraid, crashing through the wall with a tractor. He works with Reno and Quattro Formaggio.

Christiano likes (and is teased by) 2 girls at school - Esmiralda and Fabiana. He sees them shop-lift. The girls fancy Tekkon. Christiano slashes his motorbike tyres. Tekkon and his mates attack him, and threaten him for 1000 euro. Cristiano's dad, thinking the attack unprovoked, makes Cristiano attack Tekkon with a bat. Quattro Formaggio fancies one of the girls as well - she reminds him of a porno favourite.

Reno wants to keep Cristiano, so he's careful to keep their social worker Beppe happy. Beppe's starting to go out with Ida, his best friends wife. They have sex in a campervan. The roof blows off. Ida wants to live with him. Later, Beppe runs over a foreigner while driving. He's not dead after all.

A thunderstorm messes up people's plans in several of the stories. Reno changes his mind about the bank raid. Fabiana is accosted on a remote road by Quattro Formaggio, who mixes up porn with reality. Quattro kills her, calls Reno for help, then accidentally wounds Reno and leaves. Reno calls Cristiano for help. Cristiano finds Fabiana dead and his father, dying and takes him home and he's rushed to hospital. He survives. Cristiano deals with the corpse.

Dannilo hears that Teresa is pregnant and that a faulty child-seat was responsible for his daughter's death. He wants to buy a painting of a crying clown. He tries to do the bank raid alone. He's not driven for years. He dies at the wheel, speeding into the wall.

Beppe offers to stay for a week with Cristiano so he needn't go into care. He had plea-bargained with God, promising to break with Ida if the foreigner wasn't dead. Quattro Formaggio seeks God's help to save the life of Reno, then decides he should kill him instead. He starts calling himself "Carrion Man".

In the end, there's a service for Fabiano. Her father can't understand how God could let it happen. Cristiano know his father, bad though he is, couldn't have killed the girl. Quattro Formaggio kills himself.

Other reviews

  • Ian Thompson (Ammaniti's allusions to 1970s film and B-movie schlock place him at the vanguard of Italy's so-called giovani cannibali - young cannibals)
  • Toby Litt (The novel's title in Italian was Come dio comanda ... sections and chapters are a page or half a page long. Almost every scene contains a twist - and, because of this, the reader soon starts second-guessing the action. If a scene begins with a character fearing impotence, it will end with them sexually triumphant. If a character seems to have died, they will be resurrected. Also, every scene has an explicit point. The characters are shunted around with no regard for plausibility. ... this isn't a realist novel at all, but an Italian version of Deep Southern Gothic - complete with white supremacist father, idiot rapist sidekick, loser alcoholic sidekick and - at the centre of it all - a traumatised but virtuous child)

Thursday, 29 January 2026

"The Bullet That Missed" by Richard Osman

An audio book.

Connie Johnson (in her 30s) is in prison, awaiting trial. She is still running a drug ring. She's inside because of Bogden and Ron Richie. She plans to take revenge.

Ron Richie, Ibrahim (a psychologist), Joyce (78) and Elizabeth are old people who meet on Thursdays to solve cases that have stumped the police. They're interested in the Bethany Waites case. They think that talking to Mike Waghorn, a TV newsreader, might help. Pauline, his make-up artist, a widow for 6 months, joins in. Bethany was a TV reporter who uncovered VAT fraud. Her car went off a cliff. Her body was never found. She'd told her colleague Mike that she had discovered something important. Mike doesn't tell people that he suspects that Fiona (an ambitious colleague of Bethany then, now famous on TV) might have had something to do with it. Heather Garbut was imprisoned for the VAT fraud. Jack Mason, her boss, got away with it.

Elizabeth (ex MI6) and slightly demented husband Steve are kidnapped by "the Viking", an expert on money-laundering. Elizabeth is told to kill Victor (his money laundering rival) else Joyce will die. Victor, ex KGB now living in London, was nicknamed the Bullet. He and Elizabeth had been almost lovers. Elizabeth fakes his death, firing into the ceiling instead of into Victor. He stays in hiding with Joyce.

Bogdan and Donna (a policewomen) have sex on their first night. Bogdan does jobs for Elizabeth and plays chess with Steve. Donna's colleague is Chris. The Kent boss of police is Andrew (who writes novels).

Ron starts dating Pauline. Ibrahim visits Connie in jail and gets her to interview Heather. Soon after, Heather's dead. Ibrahim becomes Connie's therapist. Elizabeth and Joyce entertainingly interview Fiona. Ron chats with Jack. The Viking, by looking at the bullet-hole that in Victor's penthouse, realises that Elizabeth has tried to fool him. He tries to kill Victor, but is drugged by Joyce. He agrees to help Elizabeth. Mike has always been grateful to Bethany for helping him come to terms with being gay. Jack is found dead.

Ibrahim et al realise that the laundered money had gone to people with the names of characters in Andrew's story. 2 days later, Andrew is set up to meet The Viking. He'd been told that the Viking could recover the laundered money (£10 million). The meeting is broadcast live on Fiona's feed. Victor appears, and then Mike. Andrew confesses.

We then get Bethany's PoV from Dubai. She faked her death (with the unknowing help of Pauline) when she received a bullet in the post. She used some of the illicit money.

I like the style. Osman handles old people's loves, dementia, etc, with understanding, and can do man-talk. He can switch the tone convincingly. Plot credibility and entertainment are well balanced. He uses fewer intellectual/literary allusions than Kate Atkinson does.

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