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Showing posts with label Nikki Gemmell. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Nikki Gemmell. Show all posts

Wednesday, 18 March 2026

"Cleave" by Nikki Gemmell

An audio book.

Snip Freeman, a wandering artist, 30, received a cheque and a note saying "Hunt him down". 10 days later she's in her new car, Dave (30) driving her across Australia to Alice, having answered her advert. He's an archeologist who's not had sex for 2.5 years. She has sex with him and leaves him in Alice going 650 miles further, where people know her, to find Bud. Snip knows the Aboriginal ways.

We learn that the money and instructions were in her gran's will. She went to a convent school and got top marks. She could have done law or medicine. She only paints men. Her mother Helen is based in London. She designs lighting for big buildings. Bud (Richard) is her father. He left home with her when she was 7. She went to school in Aboriginal lands as a boy until she was found out. Bud returned her to Sydney and became religious, not going out with women. Snip finds him. He does something that upsets Aboriginals and wants to leave for a while. He wants her to go with him. In the past she'd done bad things to attract his attention (she'd worked for an escort agency, and worse). She doesn't want to turn down this invitation though she'd heard that Dave was looking for her, which excites her.

They run out of fuel in the desert. They wait days for someone to pass by. She has the chance to kill a wallaby but can't do it. She asks her father why he left her mother. He says that her mother needs to tell her that. He gives her a letter from Dave that he's been keeping from her, a love letter.

He tells her that he found she was pregnant by one of his colleagues. He used a screwdriver to give her an abortion, which is why he's never forgiven himself. He walks off. She's saved. Dave is at the hospital. Helen pays for the search to continue after the police abandon hope.

She and Dave move to Tazmania. She gets used to sleeping with someone day after day. Bud's not dead after all. He finds her, then walks into the sea. She tells Dave not to rush in and save him.

The language is attractive -

  • Snip opens a door, "letting the night rush into the room"
  • She sees a white carrier bag flapping "like a happy ghost"
  • Someone talks "like a party host trying to fill the silence"
  • a person does something "like a doctor who can do no more"
  • "like a tourist who's snuck into an empty church"
  • a calf in the road with "the affronted look of someone caught looting"

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  • Louise Truscott (it has a timeless quality. It could have been written last year or 50 years ago. The prose is fluid and lyrical. But that appears to be where all the focus has gone. Cleave is 60% description, 30% character and 10% plot. The balance is off. It’s also full of women playing roles – good daughter, good mother, good girlfriend – without considering whether their parents, their children, their partners deserve their loyalty (they almost universally don’t). ... By the time I got to the end of the book, I realised it was a literary Mills & Boon ... It’s good writing lost in a poor plot. )

Saturday, 30 January 2021

"Love Song" by Nikki Gemmell

An audio book. Lilly, a young woman who was brought up in an isolated Australian religious community, is in London talking to her unborn child.

The author said in an interview that this book "had gone to sixty drafts over several intensive years" so it's no surprise that the language is richly adjectival - "a light-drenched church, a plain wooden chair, stern-backed, with an unweilding rush-mat seat. Almost 21. Wedged between the rigid shoulder of my mother, Rebecca, and the firm lock of Tiriol, my father, and reading the nervousness of Tiroil's hand on my own, the sweat sheafing his fingers, and the flea-leap of a pulse I can't bear to touch". When she drinks spirits for the first time, she "languishes the potency in her mouth". In London she feels "the growly cold pesters me and judders my lips", and "the readiness spilling from me". In the early chapters after each section, each taxi journey, I wondered "what does this add? Is it needed?". Later I was happier with the pacing.

Lilly's mother had come to Australia intending to be an au-pair. Tiriol was a wannabee journalist into light drugs. They'd fallen in love. She'd suggested the remote community as a new start, away from temptation.

After saying at 13 that she had set fire to the school, she's under house arrest (a remote farm with her parents) until she's 21. She keeps a journal and wants to be a writer. Her only visitor is Ede, the librarian - a bit of a rebel. We're told rather late she has a husband. After her 21st birthday the community still don't want her to be freed. She's sent to her UK grandfather for 6 months, accompanied on the trip by a family friend, business man Richard Daunt, who she's fancied since she was 14. Her grandfather, Cedric, isn't good with people. He was the head gardener of a now abandoned 50-bedroomed stately house, Evenden. He still lives in the estate's cottage. Her awareness of male behaviour is surprising given her sheltered upbringing, her lack of visitors and TV. Aunt Anna, a company lawyer, befriends her. Slimey Richard is after her. She discovers that Dan, a young Australian male, is squatting in the stately house. At very short notice she leaves for London with him. She doesn't fancy him, but she's the only friend she has - he's taking a break from his family too. She sexlessly shares kind Dan's bed. She has frequent, albeit non-penetrative sex with Richard. She feels rejected by his high-society life. Neither London nor love are what she had dreamed of.

She falls for Dan's patient friendship after all. After a few months he says he wants to visit home again, to straighten things out. She insists on coming too. He drives them from the airport. She wonders why he's driving towards her home. He drops her off there and drives away. It emerges that he's the local 's son. At school, 3 years her junior at school, a loner too, he'd admired her in the library. After her expulsion he'd watched her, wanted to help her, befriended Ede. That's twist one. I hadn't anticipated it. It explains his otherwise unlikely appearance at Evenden.

Later there's twist two - he'd been the arsonist. I'd briefly wondered about that before twist one. After the first revelation it was obvious. He wants to marry her. She runs away to London. Months later he find her again. A trivial accident concusses him. Next morning he's dead. She continues to love him awaiting the birth of his child.

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