This is a Scottish poetry magazine which is no longer accepting submissions.
There are some good lines scattered around, and poems I’m not at all convinced by -
- “Home” seems to have 2 typos – “As he pulls Kirstie and I through the snow”; “they shake of the snow”
- "Saviour" fills 5 pages. It has odd spaces near commas, and lines like "Megan' awake,/ In her big brothers room,/ Same look of fear/ and impending doom/ A look I have seen on/ her tiny wee face/ Too many times now,/ sadly this is the case". I don't understand the use of upper case and apostrophes. The final line needs rewriting.
- "Report of inquiry into events during the census" appears twice, on adjacent pages. I don't think it's that good a poem.
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